B. Consult the opinions of your advisor/mentor/colleagues _ Allow someone to read through your essay. Ask for their opinions and keep these in mind. Do not forget that you can still revise your essay even up to your targeted day of submission.
Your medical school personal statement needs to sell. Every single word has to sell your reader and answer the question: "Is it worth my time to read one more word of this essay?" To be persuasive is to sell your reader on your next sentence, your next paragraph, your next idea of your medical school essay.