When you allow a fresh set of eyes on your admission essay it is almost as if your personal statement is getting practice. After all, your statement will ultimately end up being read by one or more people while your application is being reviewed so it makes sense that a well read personal statement should do better in its final stages. Why have the reviewers catch the mistakes that someone else can catch beforehand? It is far better to catch a small mistake that can cost you admission, before it actually has the chance to cost you.
This is a chronological presentation of basic information on the applicant. Depending on one's preference, the amount of information on one's past and future can be adjusted. _ Introduction (a quote, an interesting story, an anecdote, etc.) _ Personal/Family Background _ Academic and non_academic/co_curricular achievements while in school (Research works undertaken, trainings attended, etc.) _ Interest in the field _ Reason/s for choosing the school _ Plans for the future _ Conclusion