5. Suggest that the program can right a wrong by admitting you _ Remember that the committee members are busy professionals who are taking only a couple minutes to skim your statement. On the one hand, asserting that you will make a unique contribution to your program and bring a new perspective by adding to the diversity of their student body is a smart move and shows you as a positive, professional team player. On the other hand, asking for admission on the grounds that it will correct a previous injustice runs the risk of making you appear unqualified and/or confrontationalǒ. Be sarcastic _ This one doesn't need much explanation. Your ironic commentaries and sarcastic quips make your Facebook friends laugh, because they know you. The admissions committee does not. They can easily misinterpret sarcastic comments, or decide you're flippant, cynical, pessimistic, or a know_it_all.
Of all the writing, one ever knows 'Personal Statement' turns out to be an unusual or special kind of writing. This is required in many colleges or universities and is considered as important part of the application. It provides an opportunity for the students to express themselves freely and give them a chance to bring out their personality through the writing. This is the statement where one is able to present themselves to the university and also convince the academic officers of the university regarding their ability.