Stay Focused on your Theme. Before you begin your personal statement, decide what point or theme you want to get across. Make sure the entire essay revolves around that point by editing out any sentences that may lead the reader astray. Though you may be tempted to share a lot of different information about yourself in order to give the admissions committee a complete picture, it is more effective to highlight one revealing, important aspect. Pick something about yourself that you feel makes you stand out from the crowd and is related to your decision to become a physician.
Sample Outline B: Sectional Narration or Exposition To minimize the difficulty of establishing transitions between paragraphs, as well as to emphasize key points such as academic background, personality, and future plans, this second approach can be employed. To make it creative, "section headings" with an underlying theme may be used. In the following, one's life is likened to traveling. "A Roadmap"_ A section detailing one's academic and professional background. "A Journey"_ A section detailing the steps one has taken in order to prepare for one's future. "A Destination"_ A section detailing the applicant's study and career goals for the future and his overall vision in relation to his previous achievements and undertakings.