Using a sample statement as a guide _ You can use a sample personal statement in different ways, although the primarily goal in using a sample would be for you to be able to write a compelling and interesting personal statement. One way is to create your own outline to organize your thoughts and your story better. You can also make use of sample excerpts when writing a strong and interesting introduction to your essay.
Your medical school personal statement needs to sell. Every single word has to sell your reader and answer the question: "Is it worth my time to read one more word of this essay?" To be persuasive is to sell your reader on your next sentence, your next paragraph, your next idea of your medical school essay.