You already know that your personal statement could be the one factor that keeps you out, or lets you into the school of your dreams, but you may not know how important it is to have a fresh set of eyes on it before you turn it in. While you may have read over your personal statement several times, there are still reasons that you will want someone else to read it over as well.
The most convincing personal statements often consist of your academic records, accomplishments, and extra_curricular activities. It may also include any incredible circumstances, challenges, or adversities you have faced and the manner in which those bottlenecks have been overcome. There is nothing wrong in mentioning about your initiative, inspiration, headship, perseverance, and your ample experience in moving with other cultures. In short, all positive qualities or all achievements in light of the opportunities available to you can be mentioned.