Face it there are only so many spots on the roster with the school you may be looking to gain access to. Reviewers will be looking over countless application as well as countless personal statements which allows you a great opportunity to stand out from the rest by writing a statement that is leaps and bounds above the rest. By doing so, you are giving yourself a great leg up on the competition. When you go about employing the fresh eyes others to look over your personal statement before you turn it in, you will be ensuring that your one shot to impress is in fact your best shot.
What in my past did I have to overcome to be where I am today? Can I relate these experiences to my goals for the future or my motivation? Who are my influencers and role models and why? Remember these don't have to be famous people; they could be a neighbor, sibling or your parents. What are my career goals? Why do I want to continue my studies? When and why am I interested in my chosen field of study? How has this shaped me so far and what has it taught me about myself? Are there weaknesses in my application? Do I have gaps or inconsistencies on my academic records that I can explain? What are th e strengths of my application? Do I have awards, recommendations or honors that are relevant which I should mention? Field experience: _ Internships and jobs relevant to my field of study including skills learned and experience gained Has my field experience prepared me for my future career _ how so? _ What social services/volunteer programs have I been involved in? What did these teach me in general and about myself? Did these relate to my field of study? _What extracurricular activities have I been involved in and have they contributed to my studies or professional goals?