You may find it helpful to prepare a brief synopsis or outline of the way you see your personal statement developing. It doesn't have to be very long or detailed and, like most personal statements structures, you do not have to stick to it if, as you go along, you find a better route for your journey. Keep it simple and let it serve merely as a quick reminder of where you're going. It might run like this: First memory _ seeing my new baby brother in my mother's arms. Nursing experience _ volunteer in residential nursing home. Visiting the baby clinic _ desires to become a midwife sufficed. Goals for the future _ career ambitions.
The reader of your medical school application is expecting a degree of proof and really wants to know how you know. It's not enough for you to say you want to help people. How do you know what you want to do in medicine, what have you done that leads you to know that? How to write your medical school personal statement: Persuasion The most persuasive way to answer this question is by sharing experiential knowledge. You would say to an admissions official in conversation, "I know because I've done it. That's how I know. And I can give a specific story."