The reader of your medical school application is expecting a degree of proof and really wants to know how you know. It's not enough for you to say you want to help people. How do you know what you want to do in medicine, what have you done that leads you to know that? How to write your medical school personal statement: Persuasion The most persuasive way to answer this question is by sharing experiential knowledge. You would say to an admissions official in conversation, "I know because I've done it. That's how I know. And I can give a specific story."
Empty Words _ Since most personal statements are about 5μ lines, you don't have space for empty statements such as 'I am a hard worker' or 'I am a people person'. How can the hiring manager ascertain that this is the truth without any evidence to back up such lofty statements? You need to give them examples of your work ethic and how it positively impacted your employer as well as evidence of your interpersonal skills.