This is why so many people choose to opt for help in writing their personal statement for college. For me, it was easy. My mother was an award winning writer, and I could ask her for her feedback any time I wanted (I still can, as a matter of fact) and as often as I want to. Although we don't always see agree, her invaluable input is always intelligent and well thought out. She helped me a lot on my personal statement for college, as well as my essays. But for people who don't have that kind of resource at their easy disposal, or a high school English teacher whose opinion they value, there are many sites and resources all over the internet which can help them to write a personal statement for college professionally. These can give feedback, editing, and can even give you templates and tips advising you the most common things to avoid, and the most important things to do when writing your personal statement for college. In my opinion, though, there is no real alternative to personal, face to face feedback from someone whom you trust on your personal statement for college write up. It is not easy to write a professional personal statement. Most of us struggle with the writing.
Proofread _ As with all of the application, it's crucial that you edit your personal statement. This little piece of writing reflects on you; don't let it scream "sloppy"! Write your statement and then proofread it for typos and grammar. The next day, read it again. Ask a good friend or teacher to read it too. Make your statement as near perfect as possible and it will serve your app well. A good personal statement could be the deciding factor for an applicant that is not clearly in or out. Take the time to make your writing work to your advantage and let your voice be heard in your application!