oMake sure you haven't constantly used the same word in the same paragraph. This can be very irritating to the admissions officer and it only needs a little more thought to re_word or, very often, it can be omitted without affecting the sense. A thesaurus is useful for finding alternative words.
This is the statement where there is a chance to clarify the distinctions between applicants whose academic records are quite similar and makes you unique. It is a forum for candidates to express how factors outside their school environment have improved or hampered their ability to increase existing academic and intellectual prospects.