Your medical school personal statement needs to sell. Every single word has to sell your reader and answer the question: "Is it worth my time to read one more word of this essay?" To be persuasive is to sell your reader on your next sentence, your next paragraph, your next idea of your medical school essay.
Proofread _ As with all of the application, it's crucial that you edit your personal statement. This little piece of writing reflects on you; don't let it scream "sloppy"! Write your statement and then proofread it for typos and grammar. The next day, read it again. Ask a good friend or teacher to read it too. Make your statement as near perfect as possible and it will serve your app well. A good personal statement could be the deciding factor for an applicant that is not clearly in or out. Take the time to make your writing work to your advantage and let your voice be heard in your application!