Telling Them You Want the Job _ The hiring manager already knows that you want the job, otherwise you wouldn't have applied yet applicants insist on telling the prospective employer how much they enjoy their line of work and their desire to work for the company. Your personal statement should focus on the reasons WHY you should be hired, NOT why you want the job.
Using a single basic theme is one method you can employ to guarantee your essay's coherence and effectiveness. It forces you to organize your thoughts and ideas and helps keep the essay focused. Without a theme, your essay will simply look like a haphazard collection of facts thrown together to impress the reader. With a main theme, the essay will have a focal point upon which you will develop the rest of the paragraphs.