Empty Words _ Since most personal statements are about 5μ lines, you don't have space for empty statements such as 'I am a hard worker' or 'I am a people person'. How can the hiring manager ascertain that this is the truth without any evidence to back up such lofty statements? You need to give them examples of your work ethic and how it positively impacted your employer as well as evidence of your interpersonal skills.
For prospective law students a big part of being successful with your application is writing a good personal statement. It can make or break your application so don't skip over this part of the process. _ Firstly some brief advice on writing your personal statement. This should be followed whether you're making applications to Oxford or Cambridge, or just a foundation year course at a university out of the top 100. _ What points should a law personal statement put across? Your personal statement should tell your future law school why they should admit you onto the course. For this you need to do two things: _ Give them reasons to admit you. _ Don't give them reasons not to admit you. So you need to demonstrate that you hold some key legal skills and you have a real passion for the law. A law school doesn't want drop_outs. So be honest and genuine about why you want to study the law. Do you want a challenge? Do you think you're good at it? Do you want to become a solicitor? Tell them. As for point number 2, you simply can't give them reasons to decline your application. Even if you have good academics, a personal statement riddled with errors could really mess up your application. So all that needs to be in a personal statement for law is reasons the law school should admit you. Talk about your skills, work experience, hobbies, interests and ambitions in an eloquent manor and you should be fine. Now read our top 5 tips.