C. How do field experiences enhance your application? _ What internships and/or jobs have you had in the past? _ What have you learned from your internship and/or job experiences? What skills have you acquired through your internship and/or job? _ How are your internship and/or job experiences related to your field of interest? Have your internship and/or job experiences prepared you for your future career? _ Have you been involved in any social services? How has the experience contributed to your growth, and how are these experiences related to your goals? _ What extracurricular activities have you participated in and how do they contribute to your professional goals?
When you allow a fresh set of eyes on your admission essay it is almost as if your personal statement is getting practice. After all, your statement will ultimately end up being read by one or more people while your application is being reviewed so it makes sense that a well read personal statement should do better in its final stages. Why have the reviewers catch the mistakes that someone else can catch beforehand? It is far better to catch a small mistake that can cost you admission, before it actually has the chance to cost you.