Although a personal statement is deemed to be an optional part of a resume, it is a golden opportunity to grab the recruiting manager's attention from the moment he picks up your application. This is crucial since you have about 5┦ seconds to make an impression on paper, not an easy task! Basic personal statement tips include keeping it short and to the point, including your ambition, ensuring every single world counts and steering clear of dull and clichéd phrases. Few people seem to adhere to these guidelines and include one of the following mistakes instead.
But you've got to sound: Like you care a lot, and like you're completely devoted to it. An example: "I am completely devoted to medicine for the rest of my life. It's everything for me because it's the only thing that's going to allow me to express who I am personally and professionally." High_impact language has this very strong absolute, emotionally rich, concrete side to it where as a reader I am completely engrossed, engaged, enmeshed. I buy it. I believe you. Some of the best places to look for this kind of writing is where there is someone who is making a very impassioned speech. One of the best places that I know is in the most powerful, compelling, moving speeches of our time. Like Martin Luther King's "I Have A Dream," or speeches by Gandhi, or speeches by John F. Kennedy, or speeches by Barack Obama. Speeches that really elevate you and make you feel that there's hope for you, hope for us and that there's something bigger to strive for.