You already know that your personal statement could be the one factor that keeps you out, or lets you into the school of your dreams, but you may not know how important it is to have a fresh set of eyes on it before you turn it in. While you may have read over your personal statement several times, there are still reasons that you will want someone else to read it over as well.
Highlight your accomplishments _ Some of your achievements may not fit into any categories on the application; talk about these accomplishments in the personal statement so they aren't left out. You could also use the personal statement to elaborate on an achievement that you are particularly proud of, but could not address in detail on another part of the app. Think of the personal statement as an opportunity to tell admissions officers anything you want them to know that wouldn't be perfectly clear otherwise. Don't be afraid to brag about yourself; your application is really all about selling a product__you__to the college.