Keep It Readable _ You will also want to keep your personal statement/essay to a readable length and writing style. Trying to use large words and convoluted sentences to make the personal sound more impressive will only lead the reader to put the paper down.
B. Consult the opinions of your advisor/mentor/colleagues _ Allow someone to read through your essay. Ask for their opinions and keep these in mind. Do not forget that you can still revise your essay even up to your targeted day of submission.