A personal statement can make or break you application, so taking the time to carefully write and edit your information is crucial. Follow these tips to create a stellar statement that will clarify and strengthen your application, not make it less appealing. Use your statement to address any unattractive parts of your application _ Most of your college application will entail listing your accomplishments; you won't have much room to describe details of each activity. If you have to leave part of you app blank__sports involvement, for example__your application can seem less impressive. In a situation like this, you could use the personal statement component to talk about why you never got involved with athletics. A good reason for your lack of participation will help you compete with other applicants.
5. WRITE A STRONG CONCLUSION. Your conclusion is the last best opportunity to showcase your commitment to the profession of medicine and the long road of study ahead. It is important that your personal statement sound strong to the very last period on the page. The conclusion should "frame" your introduction, in that it refers back to the beginning of your statement, reminding the reader of who you are, where you are coming from, and re_emphasizing the significance of your over_all theme. An emphatic conclusion demonstrates consistency and brings everything full circle. Do not digress to a subordinate topic or introduce, however inadvertently, another theme altogether (which is why framing is a good way to end the statement _ it allows you to check if you are still saying the same thing you started out with). The point is to end on the high note you began with.