Conducting a read_through _ A read_through is extremely important. It allows you to step back and examine the points you have made and their relation to the theme and the entire essay. For example, you might discover a certain section that did not help at all in supporting your main theme, or some details that could be better placed in the CV instead. Some even prefer to read their essay aloud or have it read to them so that they can spot lapses or gaps in coherence.
oMake sure you haven't used over long, unwieldy sentences or paragraphs. If you have you must break these up. _ oThat you've started your personal statement with a powerful introduction so this captures your reader's attention _ straight away. oThat your structure is easy to follow and that each sentence hooks into the next line. oThat you finish with your future career goals. _ A key advantage is to use a professional to edit and improve your personal statement. If, however you are working in isolation and do not have that advantage, be wary of allowing family or friends to read and comment on it. For one thing, an outside will be objective and critical: they may be full of praise or go to the other extreme so far as style, at least, is concerned.