"The prospect of helping people has driven me to fulfil many goals in life and this is truly my dream. Although it is great to have ambitions _ I now want to translate my goals into reality. Becoming a nurse is a natural extension of my interest in medicine. Following graduation, I found myself advising investment bankers on the stock exchange, secretly desiring the opportunity of helping others overcome illness and promote health."
5 _ Get help writing your personal statement _ No this doesn't mean get someone to write it for you! But getting help writing your statement can be very useful. Others can point out spelling mistakes you may not have seen, or point out how skills you have could be relevant. The very minimum you should do is get a friend / parent / tutor to look over it before you send it off. It could be the difference between acceptance and rejection.