Lousy samples and excerpts _ Some sites, which provide personal statement samples, also provide excerpts based on personal or biographic information submitted. These statements are often delivered after you have provided them with personal information such as achievements, experiences, academic background, and your motivations for taking up the course. However, if the samples provided to you do not reflect your achievements and goals as an incoming student, you might want to look somewhere else. A good sample, outline, or excerpt should be comprehensive, interesting, and highly useful.
You already know that your personal statement could be the one factor that keeps you out, or lets you into the school of your dreams, but you may not know how important it is to have a fresh set of eyes on it before you turn it in. While you may have read over your personal statement several times, there are still reasons that you will want someone else to read it over as well.